An old bent brittle man,
soaks up the silence,
stands beside his little
Eden, hidden inside the
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This is nice Vincent, leaves me full of orange for some reason - Iovely poem. Moyaxx
Vincey, I like the way this little tale unfolds and the way the second verse so sweetly-sadly closes it. That aside, thanks for your comments on my writing today. Warm regards, Gina.