Wednesday, April 19, 2017

Secret Lake Comments

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I cast my dreams into a secret lake,
far up the valley path and hid from view.
And there must rest what time cannot forsake,
beneath a veil of vague deceptive blue.
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Barry Middleton
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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 April 2017

Valley path is so far and this is hid from view. Casting dreams in to the secret lake not only amazes mind but also mesmerizes us. Memory frees a long lost love affair but dreams are still alive. This is very thoughtful poem shared with great imagery....10

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Barry Middleton 19 April 2017

Thank you. I took more care with this one as I do when a poem is developing well. I like it too.

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