Dark, Mysterious eyes,
Holding a hundred untold secrets
In their hidden depths
Gazed, deep into mine
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This is one of my favorites. The beauty of your poem is it sends the msg/feelings across (in simple language) that the other person can really feel it :)
My god! How can you sing about falling in love in such understated tones and bring so much effect? ? ?
Wow... I would love to fall in love...