Friday, August 7, 2009

Secret Communion Comments

Rating: 3.1

The messenger has brought the news
Love in the heart has aches of longing
Firefly of the night for the nightingale
In the day for the song in sweet tongue
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Sadiqullah Khan
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i think my vote still there, but the poem is increased in it's beauty...loved each line in it as it carried very wonderful meanings...

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Sarwar Chowdhury 07 August 2009

great wording! 'watching mist'--> superb! ! 10+

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Ejaz Khan 07 August 2009

Well, well Sadiqullah, that's a great write, very uplifting, full of promise!

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