We drank
From magical fountains
In childhood parks,
We smiled
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A secret is a woman's best friend, and a secret shared with only one...is the ultimate gift of faith and trust. To break a code of secrets together...is to discover life and spirit with one another deeply. Excellent poem. :) Thanks Angie
Look what you've done, Uriah. You've got all the women here all weepy and swooning. What a guy! I must admit, you paint a wonderful picture. I'd like to walk into it with one of these women.
... (sigh) it was like I was watching a love story with a box of tissues next to me, bound by the perfection of the day and the power of love. great work! HBH
A dream-like day together. Sounds utterly perfect and there's nothing I'd like better. j.
This one is magical Uriah, a lovely scene depicted with such warmth and love. Loved it immensely. Love Ernestine XXX
A snapshot of a a wonderful day captured in a poem. Excellent. Regards, Sandra Fowler
Sounds like a perfect day.....and evening Uriah. I wonder if you look at anything without the beauty of it shining through. Great poem. Sincerely, Mary
gives you a warm fuzzy feeling inside, dunnit? love it