Sunday, August 9, 2009

Secret Bliss Comments

Rating: 5.0

There was an old man
In the merry glen
Who would sit for hours that ran,
On green fields then
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Philip Winchester 29 September 2009

You have it already in you my Friend, A natural Talent to capture and release Wordsworth within the Nature that he so Loved. Thank you for sharing. Philip

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Bob Blackwell 11 August 2009

Flows well from each stanza to the next, you write very well

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 09 August 2009

a natural stream like poem...very well done

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