I look up, I look down
So vast, limitless univese
I am failed to count,
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I look right, I look left I take some turns all around I guess all are secret. ...... wisely penned, loved,10
I look up, I look down So vast, limitless univese I am failed to count, ...... a great introspection, thanks for sharing,10
We have a limitless universe and there are things around us which are secret. Beautiful poem with nice presentation. Thanks for sharing.
A great start with a nice poem, Robert R. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks
Secret Around is a great philosophical poem with nice form Haiku, thank you for sharing this poem,10
So very true...we may never know the mystery that is around us...a lovely write!
Profound piece of poetry depicting the enigmatic vast phenomenon - The Universe, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. Beautiful poem elegantly brought forth with insight. Thanks for sharing John. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.
Yes, secret is all around us, scientific saying, thank you