I know I'm not supposed to be here
but listen if you will
It's as if I cannot think clear
life's a bitter pill
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Just one you must be joking, I find that hard to believe, lovely write don't we all live in hope top marks Chris
Definitely brings alot of memories back for anyone who had that little secret crush. Love your writting style, and you really go about the subject nicely =) -Ash
Your poem reminded me of a great crush I had when I was in 6th grade. You're a very effective narrative poet. I like your style.
I really liked this poem. I feel the same way about someone.... -Storm
I 100% and more agree with Doc.You are amazing.A 10 along with many other of your poemos. Lots of love Roger
Oh, i love how you've crafted this one. There's the tinge of longing, a certain sadness, yet a mystery. Fantastic job! I think admiring someone is the closest we ever get to love, ie if the other person dosen't love you back. Preets
No doubt its really nice