Monday, October 16, 2006

Secret Admirer Comments

Rating: 5.0

I know I'm not supposed to be here
but listen if you will
It's as if I cannot think clear
life's a bitter pill
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Lee Degnan
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Iron Jonath 29 January 2018

No doubt its really nice

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Phil Dispenza 09 June 2008

What are you doing in my head

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Broken Peaces 30 December 2007

Just one you must be joking, I find that hard to believe, lovely write don't we all live in hope top marks Chris

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Meggie Gultiano 03 November 2007

Lovely written from a beautiful lady

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Ashley Maurer 28 August 2007

Definitely brings alot of memories back for anyone who had that little secret crush. Love your writting style, and you really go about the subject nicely =) -Ash

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Blue angel Florida 18 August 2007

That is lovely! Thanks!

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Jemarie Ragudo 16 August 2007

Your poem reminded me of a great crush I had when I was in 6th grade. You're a very effective narrative poet. I like your style.

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Violet Llewellyn 10 May 2007

I really liked this poem. I feel the same way about someone.... -Storm

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Dee Daffodil 08 March 2007

Nicely done Lee! ! Hugs, Dee

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Roger Bowman 07 December 2006

I 100% and more agree with Doc.You are amazing.A 10 along with many other of your poemos. Lots of love Roger

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Chuck Audette 08 November 2006

Nice telling, rhymes and closing. An admirable poem! chuck

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Preeti - is here! 27 October 2006

Oh, i love how you've crafted this one. There's the tinge of longing, a certain sadness, yet a mystery. Fantastic job! I think admiring someone is the closest we ever get to love, ie if the other person dosen't love you back. Preets

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Nimal Dunuhinga 26 October 2006

An elegy of longing and regrets! The rhythm is so sad.

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Patricia Gale 22 October 2006

Beautiful, a secret love and secret want.... well done!

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Lee Degnan

Lee Degnan

Peekskill, NY
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