Monday, September 7, 2020

Secret Admirer Comments

Rating: 4.5

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Days begin to pearch as the calls begin to roll through,
I left it unpicked but responded to the text coming through.
I placed the footprint in my heart and retard the fingerprint.
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Oluwatosin Thomas
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Dr Antony Theodore 18 December 2020

I chew off your name like the air in me, I pledged my allegiance to your lies and bear no witness to your truth, I handled your love as nothing and treat your hate like jewelry. getting deep into love and its problems. tony

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Mahtab Bangalee 09 September 2020

I handled your love as nothing and treat your hate like jewelry ...I live my life unconsciously and it turns you off consciously ... Now all i feel within me is there's a lover somewhere, Unknown admirer that is unknown to me, Or known admirer yet unknown to me.....those lines are exclusive as the admiring of love; impressive I'm there where this me is nothing but breath, heart, lungs, bIood, nerve...of you; congrats for being selected this poem as POD

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Khairul Ahsan 09 September 2020

'I handled your love as nothing and treat your hate like jewelry' - An amusing confession!

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Dr Antony Theodore 09 September 2020

My apologies i relay to you for the time past, My mistakes i wish i could withdraw, The truth I've aired to you where ever you may be, But that someone is not me. very fine poem. t ony

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Bharati Nayak 09 September 2020

Now all i feel within me is there's a lover somewhere, Unknown admirer that is unknown to me, Or known admirer yet unknown to me. A beautiful poem about lost love- - Congratulations for being selected Poem of the day!

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 September 2020

" There's a lover somewhere" ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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An exquisite piece of poem on love that is kept in the bottom of the heart despite errors appeared on the top. Love is of that nature even if we share it to the maximum still is who at the receiving end is seen not fully satisfied.Apology I think, will not work with such people...10. Congratulations too as it has been included in POD

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Mahtab Bangalee 07 September 2020

My apologies i relay to you for the time past, My mistakes i wish i could withdraw, The truth I've aired to you where ever you may be, For someone else will love you back, But someone isn't me! .....beautiful loving poem penned; just love it

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