Thursday, October 30, 2008

Secret Admire Comments

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i see you
you see me

you turn away
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elena winters
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Evaughn Gray 13 November 2008

it's cute, it's soft and sweet maybe even a little hint of pleading.. but it was a wonderful poem non the less! ~Hazel G.E

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C T Heart 12 November 2008

a beautiful write of your feelings...so expressive...

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 12 November 2008

Oh what a feeling! .The untold would be reveal soon after your ready! ! Nice piece Breeze.Keep writing.

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Emily Oldham 06 November 2008

great poem................ i love it........ Athena *** words will change the world ***

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elena winters

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