Secret. Comments

Oh superb thoughts.. U r really amazing.. But rightly said the poet below down u need polish.. U r a diamond u need furnish the dust.. God bless.. *Smile4ever*

Damn stark frank and forward in your presentation but needs polish so that you can shine well. Do some homework using a dictionary to help you with spellings and meanings and I am sure you will be at the top someday! ! Good luck and god bless you. arya

with this kinda writes...........u ain't ordinary gal.....................your xtra.............

liked this, written from the heart, always for me the best place to write from, falling in love with words, been there smiffy

nice love story...............

There's a few gramatical errors, but other than that its very good. Being happy for his girlfriend and not being jealous or angry is a very tough thing to do. I'd give this poem a 10.