Secondhand Dreams Comments

Well, I could only hope one day to be as captivating. You've got such a pretty, twisting word choice in all your poems, or what I've read so far. X's and O's

Bill, Again...beautiful. Very powerful. S

Are you saying you were eavesdropping on the whole conversation? That makes it quite powerful!

the last two lines are so beautiful, they say it all!

Bill I really enjoyed this poem. Thank you.

I thought this was truly beautiful Bill. Very romantic and descriptive.......I loved it. Sincerely, mary

Hope for your second hand job To accompany her hummed piece As the promise of another smile Fades and the passions decrease