Second Of The Two Gooder Poems...Autumn Poem by me poet yeps poet

Second Of The Two Gooder Poems...Autumn

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An Autumn Come Home

You made me feel
as the young woman indeed
in the Garden of Eden
nude absolutely

No fear of Adam's
spear
he was meant to sow tears

But youth has since evaded
we have been with burden loaded

The leaves and petals
have all withered away
come autumn now our way
smear all fragrance away
all colorful hues go too
whom, does autumn bare
as if she was another one
of his ware

We all love to see ourselves
in a mirror
like a tree
abandoned of all leaves
wrinkles left only...

Am I not depicting autumn?
Autumnally
as it is now coming

A lover of naturality
one time beauty
that I be

Wow autumn it's me...

Friday, May 29, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love,love and art,love and dreams,love and life,poem,poet,poetic expression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Poem inspired by an old,
really old man's poetry

He composed
when his young wife,
became like autumn.

but
still he loves her,
passed eighty
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 29 May 2020

Beautifully metaphor autumn to passing age fading glaze. Well penned poem. Nice to read. Appreciations. Sir.

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Mahtab Bangalee 29 May 2020

autumnal breeze flows over your hairs autumnal rain sheds on the youthful body autumnal fragrance wanders around nose autumnal petals smiles on the autumnal bed of love....

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