The ring with misplaced stone,
Your guitar pluck made of bone,
Wrappers of chocolates you once gave,
And envelopes of friendly exchanges.
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Very nicely and aptly presented the poem 'Second-hand'. Best word choice. I like this poem. Many thanks dear Jenie, keep the ball rolling......10/10
I love this poem Jenie, full of the pain you felt at having been with a fake, you show how you feel in this write and so beautifully expressed!
There is a typo at the end of my comment before. Please read who wants to be you and not a next someone.
Yes, avoid second hand products like pest. I am sure there was some pain with it. But, it is all well-done and for the good, particularly when the person concerned is an indefatigable optimist like you who want you and not a next someone. Great. Again 10.
And someone else was into your ducts, And i hate second hand products. A well penned poem.
সুন্দর লেখা কথার মালা......And someone else was into your ducts, And i hate second hand products.......
I hate second hand products I like the way it was brought to that end. Hmmmmmm ..... how an any one blame you for anything, if it was like that? Nice write. I enjoyed.
......very nicely written...I can relate...I've been given very nice gifts by ones who were fond of me before...but then we have an argument and I gave the things away...now I wish I have them ★