Monday, March 30, 2015

Second-Hand Comments

Rating: 4.5

The ring with misplaced stone,
Your guitar pluck made of bone,
Wrappers of chocolates you once gave,
And envelopes of friendly exchanges.
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JENIE FRANKSAY
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* Sunprincess * 04 April 2015

......very nicely written...I can relate...I've been given very nice gifts by ones who were fond of me before...but then we have an argument and I gave the things away...now I wish I have them ★

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 March 2015

Very nicely and aptly presented the poem 'Second-hand'. Best word choice. I like this poem. Many thanks dear Jenie, keep the ball rolling......10/10

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Hazel Durham 31 March 2015

I love this poem Jenie, full of the pain you felt at having been with a fake, you show how you feel in this write and so beautifully expressed!

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 31 March 2015

There is a typo at the end of my comment before. Please read who wants to be you and not a next someone.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 31 March 2015

Yes, avoid second hand products like pest. I am sure there was some pain with it. But, it is all well-done and for the good, particularly when the person concerned is an indefatigable optimist like you who want you and not a next someone. Great. Again 10.

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Akhtar Jawad 30 March 2015

And someone else was into your ducts, And i hate second hand products. A well penned poem.

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Jahooru Islam 30 March 2015

সুন্দর লেখা কথার মালা......And someone else was into your ducts, And i hate second hand products.......

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 30 March 2015

I hate second hand products I like the way it was brought to that end. Hmmmmmm ..... how an any one blame you for anything, if it was like that? Nice write. I enjoyed.

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