Tuesday, July 19, 2016

Second Generation (Senryu) Comments

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in grandma's mirror
i see many hopes and dreams~~
lived through her grandkids
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Govind Ramakrishnan
mirror Dreams
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Guru Kothandaraman 20 July 2016

Written with great feeling and a sense of being! Well done young man.

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Gil Highlander 20 July 2016

Govind this is a wonderful Senryu, it's not just an Asian framework, many grand parents live through their grand kids, even in Anglo-Saxon families like mine.

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Stephen Park 20 July 2016

This is a beautiful poem. I loved it very much.

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Kelly Kurt 19 July 2016

An ideal Senryu. I'm sure you make your grandmother proud

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Govind Ramakrishnan 20 July 2016

Thank you sir. More importantly, I am proud of her.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 19 July 2016

Typica Asian extended family scenario. Excellent write. Thanks for sharing.

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Govind Ramakrishnan 20 July 2016

Thank you for your kind words. It is true all around the world not just with Asian families.

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New York
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