Thursday, August 30, 2018

Second Childhood Comments

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To lighten a tired loaded shoulder
And let go all of unwanted baggage,
To walk unburdened, breathing bolder,
It is to get back to innocent age.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Edward Kofi Louis 17 November 2019

Innocent age! ! Stage and cage, Page of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 17 November 2019

Indeed a 'page of life' as you say, thanks dear poet, I suggest you read 'Second Childhood II' as well.

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Rajnish Manga 30 August 2018

A concept presented very thoughtfully. Old age gives us a chance to be innocent once again. Thank you, Aniruddha.

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Aniruddha Pathak 17 November 2019

My apologies dear poet, for acknowledging to this beautiful feedback of yours, thank you so much. You may also read 'Second Childhood II' that came later.

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Godhra - Gujarat
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