Tuesday, August 20, 2013

Second Chances Comments

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Again i saw the picture
Of past that remind me a smile
That miles me away from that time now
Again i am standing there
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Unwritten Soul
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Mj Lemon 24 April 2020

The second chance, when actually delivered, also leads to a feeling that takes us back to a 'childish' state...This is a wonderful, insightful verse, Soul!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2017

Never ending for a childish wish still child remembers the past and emotion comes through smile from far mile with picture that amazes mind. Time never turns back but this moves ahead and child grows. In unwritten journey new moment has to go. We have to feel this journey of life. The second chances come as childish wish. Brilliantly penned excellent poem is shared here.10

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Hazel Durham 08 August 2016

I can relate to this poem so well. The past can pull us back so far that the present and future doesn't exist for us as we dwell on our regrets and mistakes. But the present is for living and to be happy where we are now, to enjoy the beauty of nature, the beat of music, a smile from a stranger, a new challenge and to embrace a new Dawn! Beautiful and heartfelt write!

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Unwritten Soul 08 August 2016

Thank you veru much Hazel, no one can deny what you have said here, and it is a beautiful comment too from you :)

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Babatunde Aremu 23 September 2013

This is good! You a bit nostalgic seeking for the past. We all feel the same. Thanks for sharing

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Bri Edwards 15 September 2013

i'll have to look at this again and think about it more sometime. thanks for sharing. bri

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 31 August 2013

second chances. are the gifts that we should use them. thanks for sharing your unique ideas my dear friend.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 30 August 2013

Don't allow your regrets to pull you down.Don't suffer any longer.Try Letter when you have time. Cheers.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 29 August 2013

Excellent write and the truth is in every line in this poem. Siya_! !

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Heather Wilkins 26 August 2013

excellent write. because I don't have time to regret for something I never had for something I never had

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Dee Corpolongo 25 August 2013

A beautiful poem expressing your feelings, though regretting and second chances are never like it was, as nothing stays the same, and we can only try to learn from our past, and hope for a better future, by learning from our mistakes and lessons in life. {{{hugs}}}

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Farah Ilyas 24 August 2013

Sure everybody have desire to have second chance but the sane person knows very well that its nothing expect a fulfilled dream, we should have to move forward to keep in mind good/panic memories and experiences as well....well as poem regards, awesome like always u writes..: -)

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Hazel Durham 23 August 2013

We all deserve a second chance for we are only human and we all have made mistakes, we have to move forward with memories of the joy and pain of the past and to work through it all for a better and brighter future! Lovely write!

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David Wood 23 August 2013

We have to let go of the past and embrace the future otherwise we might become bitter and that destroys people.

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Nader Baheri 23 August 2013

it is never late to wish.wish for something better.all we better do, is keep the child inside us alive for ever. time never stops.after our lives getting near to the end, i wish we wont be repentant. kudos ~nb

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Nader Baheri 23 August 2013

it is never late to wish.wish for something better.all we better do, is keep the child inside us alive for ever. time never stops.after our lives getting near to the end, i wish we wont be repentant. kudos ~nb

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Paul Brookes 23 August 2013

For the wise yesterdays the past, todays for living and tomorrows full of adventure and maybe surprises good or bad. Regrets are unnecessary second chances always deserved. 0/10 BB

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Terry O'leary 22 August 2013

Full of wisdom, Soul... Another good one... Terry

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Valerie Dohren 21 August 2013

We all carry regrets from the past, but those regrets are coupled with learning which helps us to move forward and make wiser choices in the future. An interesting write Soul, very thought-provoking.

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Aswath Raman 21 August 2013

Oh Soul! If not you then who? Everybody, I believe, deserves a second chance! To love, to live and to learn! A fantastic write! And thanks for your sweet comments!

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Geetha Jayakumar 21 August 2013

Past is dead Future is uncertain Yet to come with lot of surprises. Oh my dear Soul Your poem is so beautiful Keep writing as well as spread the light of joy to everyone Like you do always... Loved your poem...very beautifully expressed.....

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