Second Chance...You Made Me Live Again (It's Been 5 Years) Comments

i'll put your Poet's Notes after your (partial) poem as well. bri :)

Ging, i plan to put part of your poem into my/our May showcase. i will leave off the last 13 lines and mention i have left them off. the part i will use will look like this: - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Second Chance...You Made Me Live Again (It's Been 5 Years) Ging.., ging! ', someone is calling She tap my shoulder and gently shakes me Groggy....My eyes rolled trying to figure out A lady in green standing in front of me. She smile at me 'How do you feel now? ' She ask 'Where am I? ' 'You are here inside the recovery room 'You have been transferred from the operating room your operation was successful.. Congratulations'.... I stayed in the hospital for 9 days they said i am strong in a way.. i tried to be okey and be well i was scared of my hospital bill each passing day is not easy whenever i saw the scar i felt pity really sad and upset why me? why me? i struggled with depression i cried for no reason i am helpless i am useless.. no one can go near..i throw them whatever i hold.. i shouted out i'm out of control Thank God i recovered from my nightmare.. that i thought i couldn't bear.. - - - - - - - - - - - - i'll add: [Bri has left the last 13 lines off the poem for the showcase; please see them on the poem's page.] - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - let me know if you don't like my plan. i can take the poem out of the showcase, but i am avoiding using longer poems, including some of mine. i hope you are still enjoying life. bri :)

Glad the operation was a success. A scary moment indeed it must have been, but you've come through strong, and with an incredible story to tell. Well wishes and good health be yours Ging

I lifted up my spirit! ! Thanks for your recovery and, back to life; praying and thanking the Creator Almighty always. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

flock of birds in the meadow song of the leaves in the shadow beat of the heart in the loneliness kept as sweet as we overcome an operation