Monday, January 29, 2018

Second Chance Comments

Rating: 3.8

If we had another chance
Could we make it work
Would we put each other's needs
Before our very own?
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susette varga
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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 January 2018

An amazing poem! ....Could we love wholeheartedly/Give understanding/And respect? ...insightful expression...loved reading your poem...10

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Invisible One I Am Not Here 30 January 2018

Great suggestion Naga. Thank you x

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Naga Vamshidhar Ratakonda 30 January 2018

Good One. Suggest below few lines too: -) It's a Choice we both make, That gives Hope, For a Second Chance, Which could be our Last

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 January 2018

Susette, such a challenging poem...10+++

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