Monday, June 27, 2011

Second Chance Comments

Rating: 5.0

the world stops i hear no sound
everytime you come around
i feel as if im levitating
so when i fall you'll be the only one to catch me save me
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 27 June 2011

Nice poem composed with vivid imagery. I liked the theme very much. Kudos to your skill. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... I shall be highly obliged if you please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Warmest regards Akmal

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