Second Chance Comments
Who needs you,
why do they call you second,
What is your chance,
When I fail to meet the expectations,
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Nice poem with images polished to reality. I just wrote a poem titled 'the second chance' a bit similar to yours, you can view it and comment at your leisure
Nice poem with images polished to reality. I just wrote a poem titled 'the second chance' a bit similar to yours, you can view it and comment at your leisure
Original writing full of images that are clearly delivering a strong and notable message. I think there could be a few changes in dialogue that might strengthen this even more. I tiny bit of overwriting perhaps but then just my opinion. I like the way you've brought this to its closing. Everyone at one time or another wishes for that 'second chance'.... Light.
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8/1/2025 7:00:25 PM # 1.0.0
Nice poem with images polished to reality. I just wrote a poem titled 'the second chance' a bit similar to yours, you can view it and comment at your leisure