Monday, August 29, 2011

Secluded Island Comments

Rating: 4.1

Oh, the white feathered clouds,
Where are you floating invisible,
While I am outroaring for you?
Why do you change the colour of feathers,
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VIPINS PUTHOORAN
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Harindhar Reddy 03 November 2011

I don't use branded goods for the fear of cost! But give a Brand new name A perfect romanticist - junior Keats. For your heavenly imagination I bow my head in humble supplication.. You can peek in any soul including mine..... I can give many smiles! ha! ha! ha! 'Pirates of blue sea abused me, As nothing valuable was inside me.'

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Minu Alex 11 October 2011

A love story! nice! ...

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Sd Tiwari 01 October 2011

Good poem on love. This lovely poesm deserves to be loved. Full marks 10

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Jim Troy 01 September 2011

Vipins, I really like this poem. Such beauty and fantasy and most of all a love story. The hearts melt together and desires expand... But it is your unique telling that held my attention all the way... It is very enjoyable Thanks for inviting me Jim Troy

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