Tuesday, February 19, 2008

Seasons (Winter) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Life's essence ebbs in metered spews of frosted broken breaths;
He trudges up that final slope, exposed in mottled flesh.
All failing thew on grinding bones, this winded rusted train,
Masks agony in coats of hopes; his body's last betrayal.
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Alto Lee Thomas, Jr.
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Mary Gordley 19 February 2008

Very much the essence of Winter depicted, both the season and the Winter of man's life. Very well done Alto, Thanks.

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Alto Lee Thomas, Jr.

Alto Lee Thomas, Jr.

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