Seasons Of The Heart (Ghazal) Comments

I took note that this was a Ghazal as I looked at the title, but became oblivious to this as I read the poem. I found it stunning, free flowing and philosophical. The last two stanzas are particularly wonderful. You have certainly pulled at the seasons of my heart Ben....10 love Karin

liked your thinking in this one Ben

wonderful cognitive extended metaphor ''The sea goes its own way being a world all its own. The climatic law of the land is washed away. Those that sail the oceans learn of different seasons.'' wonderful abstract poem, thank you for sharing..................10+++++

it reminds me of the sestina wiht the forced repitition of word.. i got a sestina to post... i don't like it(my sestina) .. such are tough.

'Age is not content to contemplate just four seasons. With love there are many seasons of the heart to explore. I for one know some but, by far, not all its seasons.' Fine words. A beautiful read.

Ammmmmmazing! chosen words are fine! being informed by you dear ben about Ghazal, I hope i will able to write.. 10+

Sharing is a must to accompany our reasons If we truly intend to know all of heart’s seasons. No one, even I, knows all of heart’s many seasons. ....................................... I truly love these lines, Ben So, this was the one you told me..Ghazal This is beautiful..I was carried away by your words..beautiful Someday, i can also do this..in many seasons..and reasons. thank you for sharing this..i learn a lot from you, Sir. You've been good to me..and will always be..