Our love came in the gentle Spring,
So sweet and fresh and true -
When we were young and unafraid,
And all was clear and new.
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How beautifully expressed! It touched my heart.... A profound write!
So sad, like the seasons change so can love change! Superb write!
such a beautiful write using the seasons as a backdrop. I like very much.
Simply beautiful. It's written with a great flow. lovely! ! !
Love can leave things behind, but sometimes we leave behind love under that cedar tree. A sad story... But so transfixing while read. Nice work. -W
A natural withering away in winter after a sprouting in spring, a blooming in summer and a ripening in autumn! Enjoyed these seasons of love!
The seasons of love and its turning. A nice romantic if not sad write.
According to Seasons love is a bed of roses and then its a star on the wane! BEAUTIFUL WRITE!
Similiar to my Seasons Of Life, but much better. I hope this is not a true story. At least your love and ability with poetry has not departed-another10
Very beautifullt and smoothly your thoughts go with flow and rhythm of seasons. It ends in a gloomy wintry note.
Your portrayal of the seasons of love has transported my thoughts into a world of nostalgic anguish that I would cherish to feel... When Valerie spins her beans who can help not bending down and picking them up?
Metaphorically perfect in four part harmony. Reminds me of an old Paul Simon song, April, come she will......
A very sad story that touches the heart. But then, it sets for the reality of life. Again, beautifully penned and finely set.
Yes love can be a complicated cycle, bitter-sweet. Lovely write.
unfortunate for two hearts to part, but just as some life end too soon same goes with love. a lovely piece
Love and Life not always one Things do change for everyone But not everyone can describe the so many times sad evolution of life like a Poet can, Just a few beautiful images, words stanzas, and it's All there That is what Valerie Dohren has so masterfully done with Seasons of Love BEAUTIFUL and as Life, sad
This love story accompanies the dance of seasons in a truly melodious rhythm! like the poem itself, the poet beautifully achieves a balance after that love faded away... Wonderful read! Best regards, Maria
you are truly gifted, we expect many wonders from you