Thursday, June 20, 2013

Seasons Of Love Comments

Rating: 4.9

Our love came in the gentle Spring,
So sweet and fresh and true -
When we were young and unafraid,
And all was clear and new.
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Valerie Dohren
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Rupesh R.k Babu 22 July 2013

you are truly gifted, we expect many wonders from you

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Piyush Dey 21 July 2013

How beautifully expressed! It touched my heart.... A profound write!

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Hans Vr 29 June 2013

happens to so many relationships. good write, Val

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Hazel Durham 29 June 2013

So sad, like the seasons change so can love change! Superb write!

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Heather Wilkins 25 June 2013

such a beautiful write using the seasons as a backdrop. I like very much.

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Passionate Reader 25 June 2013

Simply beautiful. It's written with a great flow. lovely! ! !

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..... W@king Up..... 25 June 2013

Love can leave things behind, but sometimes we leave behind love under that cedar tree. A sad story... But so transfixing while read. Nice work. -W

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Valsa George 25 June 2013

A natural withering away in winter after a sprouting in spring, a blooming in summer and a ripening in autumn! Enjoyed these seasons of love!

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Danny Draper 25 June 2013

The seasons of love and its turning. A nice romantic if not sad write.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 25 June 2013

According to Seasons love is a bed of roses and then its a star on the wane! BEAUTIFUL WRITE!

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Joseph Anderson 24 June 2013

Similiar to my Seasons Of Life, but much better. I hope this is not a true story. At least your love and ability with poetry has not departed-another10

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Yasmin Khan 24 June 2013

Very beautifullt and smoothly your thoughts go with flow and rhythm of seasons. It ends in a gloomy wintry note.

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Dinesan Madathil 23 June 2013

Your portrayal of the seasons of love has transported my thoughts into a world of nostalgic anguish that I would cherish to feel... When Valerie spins her beans who can help not bending down and picking them up?

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G.R. Gaus 22 June 2013

Metaphorically perfect in four part harmony. Reminds me of an old Paul Simon song, April, come she will......

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Walterrean Salley 22 June 2013

A very sad story that touches the heart. But then, it sets for the reality of life. Again, beautifully penned and finely set.

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Godfrey Morris 22 June 2013

Yes love can be a complicated cycle, bitter-sweet. Lovely write.

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David Wood 22 June 2013

Love strolling through the seasons. It is so sad when love dies.

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Kelvin Owusu 22 June 2013

unfortunate for two hearts to part, but just as some life end too soon same goes with love. a lovely piece

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Sandra Feldman 21 June 2013

Love and Life not always one Things do change for everyone But not everyone can describe the so many times sad evolution of life like a Poet can, Just a few beautiful images, words stanzas, and it's All there That is what Valerie Dohren has so masterfully done with Seasons of Love BEAUTIFUL and as Life, sad

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Maria C. Pires Costa 21 June 2013

This love story accompanies the dance of seasons in a truly melodious rhythm! like the poem itself, the poet beautifully achieves a balance after that love faded away... Wonderful read! Best regards, Maria

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