Sunday, September 9, 2012

Seasons Of Life Comments

Rating: 4.4

How like the seasons is our life,
We face the sunshine, storms and strife;
As seasons come, so they must go,
We are enjoined within that flow.
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Chinedu Dike 08 December 2024

Nicely expressed in verse with rhythmic splendour

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 October 2020

We face the sunshine, storms and strife and learn many things from troubles we face. We become acquainted with all the seasons. Spring to summer we learn all arts. An excellent natural poem is well penned..5 stars..

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Mill.Barbara 03 April 2020

588 Shepherd St Ln

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A.P.J Abdul Kalam 08 April 2019

it Is not good poem

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Sylvia Frances Chan 20 December 2020

WHY NOT, Mr. ABDUL KALAM? !

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A.P.J Abdul Kalam 08 April 2019

It is telling about all the season

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Mahak Bhurani 25 November 2018

Best video poem

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Tricia Slipacoff 24 May 2018

Lovely poem. Could I get y our permission to use it in a wellness blog I am writing for my Pilates studio?

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Manya 10 December 2017

Nice...but u should male us understand the situation in the poem....

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Chloe Due 05 November 2017

i am writting an analysis on this amazing poem but i cant seem to find out what the meaning behind it is and i cant find out any poetic devices if anyone knows please help

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Chloe Due 05 November 2017

im writting an analysis on this poem and i cant seem to find what it means and what the poetic devices are if anyone can help me it would be great

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Terry Dawson 13 October 2015

There is beauty in simplicity! Indeed the seasons of nature are full of parallels with the stages of our lives. Thank you for this poem!

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Oduro Bright Amoh 05 October 2015

A simple poem with a simple rhyme scheme and a profound theme. Very enjoyable

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Bernard Snyder 05 October 2015

Nicely written. Great poem Joe!

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Anil Kumar Panda 05 October 2015

Very nice use of metaphors while describing stages of life. Liked it.

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Paul Reed 05 October 2015

Joseph your poetry is open, philosophic, mature, free-flowing, simple and an absolute pleasure to read

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Josey Alfred 03 May 2015

Thanks for sharing, very easy flow, packed with real life experience, yet simple.very well rhymed and so easy to understand.

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Femi Oloidi 02 November 2012

God gracious! ! ! I adore the rhyming, its well composed, and it steals the reader away. I normally used to do lots of rhyming when I started writing poems, but as time grew, I had to swerve and try out other ways, that were not made up of to much rhyming, it was hard though, but I broke through, and now, I could say; I could cook up a poem with the both spice. Really I look forward seeing more of ur works. Good luck with ur life endeavours and never forget dat But always believe u could do better. kudos! Kingfemi

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Adeline Foster 17 September 2012

I too enjoy you work, Joseph. Thanks for your kind words. Too bad you're to far away to come hear my poetry reading next month in Boonsboro, MD. This one reminds me of Ecclesiastes 12: 1-7. Adeline

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Nurain Ali-balogun 17 September 2012

Not often do I stumble into amazing poems like this. Very symbolic and mild in depth and yet, very poetic. I like your style Joseph, keep up the good work.

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Asif Andalib 16 September 2012

I enjoyed reading your excellent poem. thanks for sharing

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