Friday, August 14, 2009

Seasons Kaleidoscope Comments

Rating: 3.3

shimmering moonlight
tethered boats
rocking with the stars
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Ben Gieske
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Sathyanarayana M V S 26 August 2009

Enthralling poetry. Each piece is a gem.

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So many glorious images Ben. My favorites are 'warmed-up toes', the last jellybean piece and 'again and again, your sweetness holds me, together we cling'. You have done a magnificent write on each one of these... 10 Karin Anderson

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I Facebooked this poem and gave it a ten.Very colourful and full of life! ! ! ! I felt like the year of the wheel was turning just as one moves a kaleidoscope. image in each turn, leaving the reader/viewer spellbound...

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Meggie Gultiano 14 August 2009

I have a beautiful journey here in your piece, Sir Bern. a peaceful and happy journey indeed..From moonlight, to summer and Christmas.All wrapped up with flowing beautiful words to live by. I love most these lines of yours.. moving clouds ships on a journey wandering seeking answers sometimes that’s enough yes..i agree..sometimes that's not enough. I love this piece of yours very, very much. A moving write for me.I have to read and re read again and again.Thanks for this wonderful sharing.. God bless you, Meggie

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