Monday, October 12, 2009

Seasons Comments

Rating: 5.0

Beneath the autumn sky's cold clouds of metal,
Wind chased shadows evict a last clinging petal
From it's exhausted home.
To live on the streets,
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john coldwell
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Patti Masterman 12 October 2009

Wow! This is something else. Can't believe a mere human wrote this (but if not; what on earth could?) Stupendous.

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Ian Bowen 12 October 2009

John, thought this to be an excellent piece of writing.10/10 Regards, Ian

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