Saturday, November 3, 2018

Seasons Comments

Rating: 5.0

Summer heat is beating me down to the ground.
The radiation of the sun melting my skin.
Winter chill is not really that chilly between sunrise and sunset.
I look forward to the fresh air as it feels clean to breath.
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Dave Walker 03 November 2018

Summertime is the best. A great poem.

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Chinedu Dike 03 November 2018

Well articulated and nicely penned with insight. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Brookus.

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Brook Renwick 03 November 2018

Thanks for the positive feedback Chinedu! Have a good one.

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Brooke Renwick

Brooke Renwick

Sydney, Australia
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