Sunday, June 3, 2018

Seasons Comments

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The street in the summer morning,
Pale yellow with bright sunshine,
Withered tree awaits the buds, so the heart of mine,
A Reflection from her glimpse conquered my eyes,
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Afzal Juneja
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Dr Antony Theodore 04 June 2018

One portrait. I carved. We talked. She laughed. winter, autumn, summer spring, Vibrant tree with a dancing shoe, so the heart of mine, The fragrance of her presence, a mystic spell to calm, love, romance and the seasons......... very good poem. dear poet. your perceiving eyes, the understanding heart. . you ability to reflct on it....... than ku dear poet. tony

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Aarzoo Mehek 04 June 2018

It's a beautiful feeling to be in love. So beautifully written. May love reside in your heart. keep writing.

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