Saturday, October 29, 2011

Seasons Comments

Rating: 5.0

Its cold I shiver a little
The wind is blowing slowly
He slightly slips his jacket
& places it over me…
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Vithika Jaiswal 23 January 2012

thnk u soo much :) ur guys supports really encourage!

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Darkangel Flyfree 29 October 2011

Wow that was beautiful. Very romantic. Nicely written.

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Ashraf Nasser 29 October 2011

nice poem i like how it gives the seasons a romantic twist, i would love if you could check out mines'The Burning Man'

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Saadat Tahir 29 October 2011

nice lines romantic feelings............... intertwined with nature... liked em :)

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