Wednesday, May 28, 2008

Seasonal Rebirth Comments

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This frigid forever winter starts to melt
And actually blooms into spring.
The sun thaws my heart and now it beats differently than I have felt.
In touch and in time like a seasonal rebirth;
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Michael Matsuda
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Ivan Donn Carswell 28 May 2008

Optimism begins with Spring, but as the observer you cannot go the whole way. An interesting line here: ''They stretch their leaves and pedals to the sun'' I know what was intended but the image of leaves 'pedalling' to the sun intrigues! Another well presented observation. Rgds, Ivan

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