Friday, February 14, 2014

Seasonal Affairs Comments

Rating: 4.7

The dry spell warn the plants,
To bloom faster to leave the seeds,
The once green leaves have acquired yellow,
Color, the fiery wind disperse the twigs,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 22 February 2014

Thank you Khairul Ahsam for your wonderful comment. I think that the nature as well as the human are obligated to one another..we may be happy at a certain situation and that situation can be created by any one or any thing. At that particular point we may feel that we are indebted to them in one way or another, so the simple expression of gratitude is 'thank you'..if one has invested the love in us, they will like to collect back the reciprocating love which I mentioned here as not simply 'interest' but 'due interest', because the love is not shown back in recent times, and it is due to them..the happy situation only can create such harmonious environment where people are grateful one another Thank you again..

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Khairul Ahsan 22 February 2014

This poem is a portrait of nature, with an apt title. 'The dry spell warn the plants, To bloom faster to leave the seeds, ' - These lines provide the perfect start to the narration of the 'seasonal affairs' that follow suit. 'The garden full of blooms: beetles and butterflies, Arrive with invitation from the saucy flowers, ' - The merry mood described so beautifully! 'When the spring emerges with new foliage, The hearts are happy here, paying the due interest.' I wonder as to what you might have meant here by the word 'interest'. A nice poem, over all.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 15 February 2014

The dry spell warn the plants, To bloom faster to leave the seeds lovely indeed!

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Gajanan Mishra 14 February 2014

spring emerges with new foliage, thanks, we all see.

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