Sunday, October 22, 2006

Season Of Change Comments

Rating: 5.0

There is a wistfulness in the breeze
That caresses my hair
And the warmth of the autumn sun
Stirs a longing in my soul -
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Linda Ori
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Not a member No 4 16 February 2007

No matter how intensely we live the moment, time slips away much too fast. You capture that sense of time too soon gone to perfection in these bittersweet poetic lines. Great writing Linda. xx jim

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Charles M Moore 25 October 2006

This is so sweet, a beautiful write.

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As Declan says. Simply divine. The perfect piece, L. t x

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 22 October 2006

MIDNIGHT...Great title, bettter Poem...flows quite smoothly, and th' content smacks of fine imegery and accepted change, which I for one am still trying to get a handle on...Solid Write, young lady'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK/FJR

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Herbert Nehrlich1 22 October 2006

Yes, I agree. Even if someone could find fault with any part of this I wouldn't care. It speaks to me and from me. H

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Declan McHenry 22 October 2006

Linda, a lovely piece. Dreamy and loving. I recall, indeed.

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