Season Africa Comments

This was very clear in the tumultuous land you live in how hard it is to know who is in charge at any given moment. It feels as though you have given us a glimpse of a world that is unimaginable yet beautiful in it's starkness. This is very well written and I love it. A few misspellings but not enough to change the message. I took a journey with you here and it is sad and thought provoking. Well done

I could really get a sense of how your home was like and I really enjoyed this poem it's really good! (:

Nice poem, but rhetorical of Africa. A very good write with sonorous imageries. Thank you for inviting me to read.

I love your poem, and I can feel your emotions and the strength of your visions. Thank you for sharing.