Saturday, April 22, 2006

Season. Comments

Rating: 4.5

Ice crystals
falling, rising, twisting on the air
a spiraling mass, on the wind
falling covering the earth.
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Roy Storey
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***** ********* 23 April 2006

I love the cusp of each season Roy, May your seed of poetic verse, germinate year upon year. A couple of typos in the second stanza 'melt' and 'crystals'. 9 from growing! Tai

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