Tuesday, February 4, 2014

Seaside Sonnet Comments

Rating: 5.0

I stare upon the endless sea.
I swear that it looks back at me.
It whispers with the ocean breeze.
It swallows whole, my naked knees.
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Daniel Y.
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Sandra Feldman 04 February 2014

I cannot see, the Sea I love, But with this gift of poetry, You've brought It, Oh, so close to me. What a lovely, musical and visual poem.! It jumps out of the page and enters your heart Where it will surely stay and never depart. Thank you

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