Seashore... Comments

beautiful descriptive poem about the nature....thank you for sharing...

I like the images and impressions your words and wording evoke. You provide a lot for various senses to respond to. One can easily picture the scene of what is happening. Good use of double words beginning with the same letter: gigantic, geometric.......mesmerising murmur.... secluding sun..... gleaming glittering sand... splendiferous (nice word) sunset. The reader should also not miss the “scent of the sea”, “call of the...gull”, strode along the shore”, and “waves...washed away”.. All are effective in making this a pleasure reading.

fine paint by words! imagery wonderfull! ...soooooooooothing indeed! .....10++