Sunday, August 19, 2018

Seashells, Waves And Sun Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have a bag of seashells
Collected from acres of sand
Sums up my walk's treasure
At my abode, an idle land
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Melanie Emikohe
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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 August 2018

Melanie, such a heartwarming wonderful poem....10++++

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Melanie Emiko 20 August 2018

Thank you for that comment Mr. Asuncion.

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 19 August 2018

When one breaths even, conscientiously, one would see even the most trivial thing differently, to what average does. Only a sharp enough mind has this capability and only a poet can share it with the rest heartily and passionately. Lot to read between lines and I like this style. Thank you Melanie for sharing.

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Melanie Emiko 19 August 2018

Thank you for that hearty comment.

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