Monday, December 21, 2015

Seashells Comments

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Obey me!
My body hides
Lies among lies
The voiding tides erasing
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Francesco Malaspina
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Dr Antony Theodore 01 July 2017

Obey me! Will ever I? thoughtless shorelines Am I empty enough to resonate with the churning waves Like the old seashells do? Emotions are leaking through These are the points i collected from your beautiful poem. Thank you for your thoughts, imaginations A melancholic sense.. throughout the poem. Pregnant question will ever I? a fine poem, thank you dear poet. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 December 2015

Playing with the muse of nature to talk about your lifestyle. Nice work.

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