Sunday, December 24, 2017

Seascapes Comments

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The spectacular ocean is her mentor for her moods,
Bringing her back to life,
Mighty waves surging forward, releasing her energy like her daily food
For her ever-changing moods.
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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 April 2019

The spectacular ocean is her mentor for her moods, Bringing her back to life, Mighty waves surging forward, releasing her energy like her daily food For her ever-changing moods........enchanted beginning. A beautiful poem so nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.

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Valsa George 04 January 2018

I see the seascape in all your poems and feel that this poem has a deep autobiographical touch! You are able to give life and 'fire' to all your emotions! There is a kind of melancholy in most of your poems that gives a tug at the heart strings of the reader! Your poems are so emotive, engrossing and touchingly expressive! Great write Hazel!

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 January 2018

To escape the misery of her younger years, Where she never felt at home, only the ocean Freed her tied up emotions, To a softer surging of the ocean, a lot of imagination to describe the inner pain of the past of bygone years. so well and poetically illustrated.. thank you dear poetess Hezel for this beautiful poem. tony

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Susan Williams 30 December 2017

She wanders all over this planet without luggage, Just her heavy baggage of never forgotten years, - - - - - you have such a talent in writing verses like this- -creating mood, image, and searing thought. There are so many of these thought and emotion provoking lines in this poem that the reader are drawn to explore. So very well done, my friend across the ocean

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Muzahidul Reza 26 December 2017

Years of never feeling at ease A time for her heart-breaking tears, emotions and sentiments take her to far from her usual life where she alone suffers, dear poetess I love these two lines, so much, , , Your writings I always enjoy, thanks for sharing the poem with us, ++++++ 10

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O Poet Me Poety 25 December 2017

VERY BEAUTIFUL AS ALWAYS DO READ ME AGAIN O POET SUNNEVER SETS YES POET ME POET U KNOW ME

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Bill Cantrell 25 December 2017

Wow, yes, the spectacular ocean, the first stanza speaks volumes, instantly crashing against the past..inland counties does indeed suffocate such a free spirit, you must breathe the oceans breath, the ocean does not control but understands as a kindred spirit, I just love this! ! !

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Feipeng Shang 24 December 2017

Feel her deep emotion Like the surging ocean ......well presented piece!

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David Wood 24 December 2017

A lovely flow to your poems Hazel. It's nice to read your poems again.

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