Sea-Saw (More Writing Fun) Comments

Here, a year ago, I said 'My head is spinning'. Today I saw that Kim Barney was made dizzy. Some other minds, this poem has been winning, like Henry Ford's 1915 'Tin Lizzie'..

You're making me dizzy, my friend! Wood you pleas get me off of this sea saw?

My head is spinning! : ) bri

Smoky this is true poetry and i love it Bravo!

I saw! What I saw was a very fun-filled play on words. I wish everyone WOOD read this!

Smart, funny and well written. Thoroughly enjoyed it

The wood you saw and the wood you see, in the boat you saw floating on the sea could very well be the wood that is under me! I put down the rum when I saw where you were going with this one. Loved it!

The ultimate play on words I think I have ever read. What a wonderful outlook you must have on the world Smokey. This is one of those pieces that you give your friend two maybe three bottles of beer. Then film his reactions to it, i guarantee it would make wonderful viewing. Keep up the great work Smoky. Craig.

Smoky i had to read this a few times to understand it but now i can see it is really clever. Great fun well done.

What a wonderful piece of writing, I had to sit for a while after reading it to let my eyeballs stop rotating in their sockets. Good work Smoky.