Monday, June 13, 2011

Seas Of Lust (2011) Comments

Rating: 4.4

Still my eyes wander the moment when our sweat had clashed
Embracing our flaming drops devouring our unquenched love
An awe amazing precipitation, releasing endless sexual allure
Sensational swirls commence, tunneling the source of the whoa
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David Joel Rodriguez
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 13 June 2011

Nice poem. Great sentiments. The poem is rich in imagery and style. Great write indeed. I give it 10/10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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