Star Dust

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Loonytown (It's an awesome place, right between Candyland and the Strawberry Forest)
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Loonytown (It's an awesome place, right between Candyland and the Strawberry Forest)
Sunday, November 9, 2008

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You paint a wall,
Paint it blue,
Yellow, orange, and purple too,
With an absent mind,
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DELETED NOW 11 November 2008

it is a nice poem...it makes a point. and I like that point. =D

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Cheryl Lynn Moyer-peele 09 November 2008

Stardust - It is always a good idea to rescue the helpless in your poetry, it gives us all hope. Therefore blue skies exist for the future of all. You raise interesting questions though. Best wishes - Cheryl Read my poem about my autistic student if you would, From the Inside Out'.

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Loonytown (It's an awesome place, right between Candyland and the Strawberry Forest)
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