Wednesday, October 18, 2006

Searching Those Intense Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

Those were the intense eyes
That I frantically searched
Looking for the love they held for me,
And the yearning they showed for my touch.
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Nimal Dunuhinga 24 October 2006

A love triangle in equals each angle! What a sad geometrical figure? Triangulation is a dilemma? Splendid! Preeti Dartar.

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Abigail Keller 22 October 2006

Brilliant poem Preets! Glad to see these new ones! ~Amber~

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Scott Austin 19 October 2006

This piece has the intensity of a heartfelt write. Your eyes can never lie; the truth is always seen through them. May peace and joy fill your heart and your eyes always be true. Scott

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Asma Bahrainwala 19 October 2006

hey preets... a very heartfelt poem this 1... very intense... nice write... love... Asma...

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 19 October 2006

Why do these situations occur, the ones that win our Hearts, only to have our Heart tossed back, worn & torn? Tis destiny & chemistry....And as a rule, it all unfolds, (in the long run) in our favour.Solid piece Preeti'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Ashish R 19 October 2006

You poem speak your feelings well.Wonderful write as always. Ashish

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Tranquil Ocean 19 October 2006

How can I tell her about you Girl...pls tell me what to do Ahhh....The triangle.Interesting! ! Love...TO

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Nalini Hebbar 19 October 2006

preets...thank god one can read the truth in the eyes and lol...between the lines! ! ! ...intense poem...great read...love...nalini

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