Searching On... Comments

I pondered over each x and y Spent many a day thus thinking why Rachel Ann Butler

Life is full of uncertainties as we sail across the ocean of intricacy...but as we go on, we came to understand a lot if not all, and that's what we call maturity. Brilliant as ever, my dear friend! :)

looks like iam in the same boat as you...very well written

loved it. nice, short and striaght to the point.

why O why! i relate this poem to me cause it rsembles my feelings...it surely is a great write with depths hidden in those few beautiful lines and this poem ges in my fav. too thank you for sharing this wonderful work kesav...10+++++

Kesav, if we have learned from our mistakes, why look back, why not just be.....NOW. Brilliant write 10. Bob

It's human nature to always want to know the answers to the unexplained in our life journeys when our paths lead us the wrong way...very thought provoking Kesav....-Cathy

There is nothing more realistic than the passing of time, if only there we could be assured that the passing of time would bring ease...a 10

life itself is a search, easwaranji...

Dead moments come alive just as live moments do not stay forever. This is the karma of life and living. It is natural that with the ability of thought, we go back in time to analyze our actions and words and dwell over what went wrong. We post mortem incidents which have faded well into nothingness and try to find clues to what surprises us most and what could have been...........a beautiful poem and very much to my liking..............arya

such a lovely and thought provoking poem. i loved the terms X & Y that you have used here. excellent and surely a 10.

cool poem kesav, i really liked the way you portrayed the dilemma most of us face in life through this poem. please read my poem 'the eternal search', both seems to speak in the same vein for me.

Excellent life poem.A full 10.

That's the story of my life... Reminds me of a Pink Floyd song called comfortably Numb

When I started reading this poem immediately I could relate it to me. So many may feel the same. The essesce of writing poetry I think lies in such wonderful revelations of life! ! Thans Sir for sharing this.

mankind is differentiated with 'x' and 'y's... and wonderful poetry also...

A touching poem Ke, to quote John Lennon ' life is what happens to you while you're busy making other plans' springs to mind when I read this,10 Lynda xx

we live with many variables, , 'x' and 'y', , well pointed out here and in search of some 'constants', , , the beauty of life howerver lies in the 'unknown factor', , , and who would understand it better than, , Kesav, , an engineer, , any ways a well written piece, ,10

so splendid poem..... you touch my heart... hope this will be mined... thank you... ten point

At least, you are searching for your better self. Many are not even aware of the necessity of doing so. Ten for your splendid effort.. Always your friend, Sandra