Tuesday, September 29, 2009

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The moon floats in hope
high above the clouds
far from the stars of fire
no wonder the moon changes faces
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Ben Gieske
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This is both beautiful and powerful. Well done my friend!

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Meggie Gultiano 10 October 2009

this is beautiful, Ben..I love of course the title..

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Rachel Butler 10 October 2009

high above the clouds Rachel Ann Butler

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Moon with all her intuitive wisdom knows how our moods can change as she tugs on our heartstrings as the cycle of the months change. Now I know how she gets her own way as most women seem to do, as she can slap on makeup like we do too! What a stunning picture your moon creates for me and once again congratulations for having this poem published on Sketchbook too! I wonder where she was in the sky when you were born? 10 love Karin

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