Searching For Adonis Comments

Probably mostly because I have placed Cytherea and Adonis in Rome instead of Greece. I cast Cytherea as a silly schoolgirl with a crush on Adonis. But it is not meant to be. I wrote this in college when I had even less knowledge of Greek mythology than I do now. I do not consider this a serious poem but I never throw anything away. I have some even worse that this. LOL