I was born to a home
Where every body calls it Mr.X's home
I was married to a Home
Where everybody calls it Mr.Y's home
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Very beautifully executed. Really a fine poem. Five stars.
You please gift me some of your similar thoughts so that I can be proud of myself too....greatly admire this poem Bharati....congrats
Now the poet have a name, Poet and Mother Muse. i particularly like this poem as it speaks to the plight of the unseen, unsung, maker of home and the world we all come home. Beautiful and and intellectually-stimulating poem.
This is unique poem dear poetess! It gives me immense plasure to read this wonderful poem time and again!
A poem which questions the psychology of the society. We talk about gender equality but in reality we cannot see it. I always wonder why married women add Mrs before their name and married men never change Mr even after marriage. The poem toches a brilliant analysis of social psychology
Beautifully said all about a woman...I go with Susan Williams's comment greatly...yes, we are all poetesses now...well done Bharati....this poem is on top beyond scores and rating...thank you
Everybody wants his/her name to be pronounced when s/he is addressed. This is a natural urge. There is a lot more love associated with the name when one is addressed by it, than when addressed by a prefix as you have mentioned.
Yes, the 'Poemhunter' is indeed a safe and peaceful refuge of unrecognised poets, who exchange their thoughts freely here about the poems, poets and on the comments of the readers.
So nice, innocent and tender thoughts, I am touched. You have a beautiful name, Bharati and indeed we love to call you by your sweet name. You have expressed your feelings so eloquently! Beautiful poem.
Part 4. A marvellous piece of poetry, as Susan, Geeta and other poets have opined. Congratulations.
Part 3. It is really hard for a woman to find a space for her, in this ‘Man's World'. And, Bharati, you have done it. Your achievement is, by no means, a mean achievement!
….part 2. It is for her to find a NAME for herself, for her ‘SELF'. However hard it is!
I made a revisit today. Yes, women are being treated as "tagged" to a man, who is father, husband, son,
You have not only made several comments on this poem, @Unnikrishnan E S, but also appreciated other poets' comments. I do really appreciate your thoughtful gesture.
Really lovely _madam. Very intelligent piece and a mice champaign. Please do read my poem 'Her Creed' _
Yes, one's identity is supremely important, and the search goes on throughout life as identity grows, changes, as life changes, as time passes…