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When your secret is out
then part of you is out,
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Annette Aitken
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Christopher Tye 18 March 2017

Really nice poem, trust and the human minds are things that are easily broken.

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Unwritten Soul 10 March 2017

beautiful and so much alive, the poem has soul inside it :) and you know i understand this feeling, you will be fine Annette you are a distant star that brave enough to against the darkest space :)

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Seamus O Brian 06 March 2017

A light and airy, almost dream-like vision, Annette. The longing for freedom that has been lost; but, I wonder, if such freedom was in reality an absence of knowledge of which the experiences of life eventually rob us one by one. Lovely writing, Annette. :) S

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Bill Cantrell 05 March 2017

I agree with Robert, beatiful poetry! 10+++++++

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